Thursday, May 2, 2013

The Wall


The wall devilishly grey,
I made it myself; so strong, so high
Neither could I break nor could I fly
Not a wall of brick or stone
Made of intangibles
Fear, despair, angst
Left me cloaked
in a darkness infinite 
 
I perish here of
desolation,not
stronger enough to
shatter the wall, and let
the light shower my soul.
 
The soul craves for
the hallowed ray, for
someone to crush the
wall into dust, 
set me free,
show me the light.

19 comments:

  1. Beautiful; lines on a captive mind.....it's true that we tend to build walls across ourselves which we fear to break..

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    1. Thanks :)) Actually sometimes even if you want you can't break it. Fear, despair, anxiety are so deep rooted in our sense, they are difficult to be won.

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  2. My soul is craving the same way! Hope the wall gets broken soon!

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  3. Don't worry. You can break your wall :)

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  4. I guess everyone can relate with this imaginary wall concept..
    we block our mind and actions with that, turning a blind eye n fact that our actions are biased, biased with that self-made wall..

    interesting read Himadri..

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    1. Thanks Jyoti :). Sometimes this self made wall becomes so strong that breaking the wall becomes difficult.

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  5. Life creates walls all too frequently... Nice lines.

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    1. Very true sir. Thanks for stepping into my space :)

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  6. AS is the nature of this life we lead.

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  7. Hello again Himadri :)

    I have nominated your blog for the Liebster blog award....congratulations:)

    http://stillettomaniac.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-awards-go-tome.html?showComment=1368275852006#c4886480454607757106

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  8. Beautiful and touchy lines. Loved the thought expressed within. Thank u for the share. Keep posting with lots more.

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  12. Nice post, things explained in details. Thank You.

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